Pulled out the jammy -- aimed it at the sky.Now, the line that goes:
He yelled, "Stick 'em up!" and let two fly.
Hands went up and people hit the floor.
He wasted two kids that ran for the door.
He wasted two kids that ran for the door.
should be:
He wasted two kids who ran for the door.
The two kids are people (even after being wasted), and as such, should be referred to using the pronoun "who."
So I always make the correction.
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I am so with you! I hate that mistake.
Fight the power, sister. -- Joe
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